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Re: Everything Damages
Thanks for your help... the only thing is that it completely changes the feel of the poem in my opinion... such as "trembling voice".. where did you get that from? ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: It's Just You and Me...and Her
Hey there. Sorry It took me so long to reply again.... Anyway..... This stunned me as much as it did the first time. It was so perfect the first time ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: Falling Dreams
Awww thank you.... I wouldn't mind at all... :oops: I feel special!
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Dead Lights 1/2
Oh, post part two, please post part two! You're right, it was bizarre, but fabulous. In a way it felt a little creepy. All grammar is correct, and I think ...
Jun 23, 2008 -
Re: I Heard That The World Was Dying
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it... I think I understand what you mean about those weird line breaks. I wanted a kind of separated effect. Sort of as if there ...
Jun 23, 2008 -
Re: I Guess You Were Weaker Then I Thought
Thanks for your help guys, i'll edit this as soon as I get the chance. I also had a question: 'r' seems a bit of a harsh rating for just ...
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: I'll see you tomorrow.
Thanks for all your comments and suggestions everyone. I wasn't sure how this would do, considering I wrote it in about three minutes. But this makes me happy... fells like ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Some Say The World Will End In Fire
Um.... When I click on the site it says your pig ate it! :D
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Some Say The World Will End In Fire
mikedb1492: Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. Piranha: Wow, thanks this really helps! I can understand the places where you got confused, sometimes I have trouble with writing ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: What happened?
Two words: Right on!
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Grace:
This is a lovely poem and I think you have a really nice new style going. I love how you separated the word broken (if that was on purpose.) Anyways, ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Intensity
Quite a good piece of writing you have here, sad though. Good emotion, images, and rhythm. Are the three words and syllables 'I love you'? or am I completely off? ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: The Dancing Stars
I agree that it needs some punctuation, but wow, that was really beautiful. I love its simplicity, really great job.
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Blood River
First reaction: Huh? Second reaction: *rereads* Third reaction: Ha! Fourth reaction: *Laughs uncontrollably... pauses... laughs uncontrollably again* :smt041
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Darling...
The writing was good but..... (BigBadBear and Sleeping Valor both mentioned something to this effect already)..... Definitely too Twilightish.
Feb 25, 2008